Wording tweak for clarity and to reduce sentence length

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@@ -100,9 +100,9 @@ while conducting a security audit. NTT is a longtime contributor to PostgreSQL.
 platform provider Heroku were given early access. Why did this occur?</h2>
 <p>Heroku was given access to updated source code which patched the 
 vulnerability at the same time as other packagers. Because Heroku was especially 
-vulnerable, the PostgreSQL Core Team worked with them both to secure their 
+vulnerable, the PostgreSQL Core Team worked with them -- to secure their 
 infrastructure and to use their deployment as a test-bed for the security 
-patches, in order to verify that the security update did not break any 
+patches. This helped to verify that the security update did not break any 
 application functionality. Heroku has a history both of working closely with 
 community developers, and of testing experimental features in their PostgreSQL 
 service.</p>